Tuesday, 9 September 2014


She laid there,  her chocolate brown eyes stared into the diamond blue sky.  Madelyn smiled at the sun and the sun smiled back in a secret way only she could understand. 

Happy tears rushed down her face because her dad was coming home that day and she had never felt so happy. Madelyn quickly ran inside to set the table,  she put the cookies on the plate which she had made for her dad and she was proud of them.  However there was no beer on the table for him so she grabbed some beer from the fridge. Then a car drove up the drive way.It was dad.     

By Kenjiah.W

1 comment:

  1. spectacular writing Kenjiah W

    senserly Ella b


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